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Fri, 04/25/2008 - 01:20 — Allan
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Hey guys. Name's Allan. I'm assuming this would be the best place to post a plug/req for crits/feedback in this forum? I couldn't find any topic I liked better so I'm hoping this is OK!

Here are some sample strips from my strip, entitled "Allan," which is an autobiography.

The link is right here.

Gotta steal 'em all!



Alliterate THIS!

As I said before, autobiography. I'm 16, and it's about me. It's usually humorous, but we're in a more serious storyline right now.

Tell me what you think if you don't mind! Thanks guys, thanks a bunch!

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Fri, 04/25/2008 - 09:25 — xerexes
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Re: Webcomics which are made by a person named Allan

The alliteration one is funny in a low-key way.  It's got potential! 

Keep working on crafting individual comics with a good "beat" - not necessarily laughoutloud funny but some kind of a-ha for the reader to take away.  Keep working on the art - it's serviceable but you could certainly improve (try including more backgrounds...)

 

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Sat, 04/26/2008 - 16:23 — Allan
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Re: Webcomics which are made by a person named Allan

Thank you xerexes! I will take those words into consideration.

For any readers who might be reading here: Hey guys! Just wanted to thank all the readers and voters for helping out with getting the strip to the top 100 in TWC! I really appreciate it, and there will be a double update later this month because of it! You all rock.