Scene, perspective and a new webcomic
Submitted by DreamShadows on February 5, 2005 - 15:32
Well first I think I'll introduce myself, since I'm new to these forums but looking through them already found some interesting tips and discussions. I'm known as DreamShadows online, and I'm the artist of a relatively new webcomic (about a month old now) named Casting Shadows and the colored version on Drunk Duck http://www.drunkduck.com/Casting_Shadows/
But I don't want this o be just a cheap plug. The fact is I like feedback and while I don't hope to be in any way popular or well known, I do want to make a good webcomic that the readers that I do have will enjoy. With it's hard to get opinions in the begining because not many people comment or respond with what they think. So while I'm still trying to improve... I'd like to work more on my perspective and scenes, and I was wondering if there were any tips or ideas that you guys might have to help me improve that. I'm already afraid I dragged out the first scene too long (14 pages).
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Scene, perspective and a new webcomic
by DreamShadows - 02/05/2005 - 15:32
Well first I think I'll introduce myself, since I'm new to these forums but looking through them already found some interesting tips and discussions. I'm known as DreamShadows online, and I'm the artist of a relatively new webcomic (about a month old now) named Casting Shadows and the colored version on Drunk Duck http://www.drunkduck.com/Casting_Shadows/
But I don't want this o be just a cheap plug. The fact is I like feedback and while I don't hope to be in any way popular or well known, I do want to make a good webcomic that the readers that I do have will enjoy. With it's hard to get opinions in the begining because not many people comment or respond with what they think. So while I'm still trying to improve... I'd like to work more on my perspective and scenes, and I was wondering if there were any tips or ideas that you guys might have to help me improve that. I'm already afraid I dragged out the first scene too long (14 pages).
by CaveMonster - 02/07/2005 - 03:13
The genre's not my personal cup of tea, but you've got some great stuff going on here.
Your anatomy is strong in some pages, weaker in others, it feels like you can do great stuff when you spend the time. Panel construction is very nice, also the use of different textures, especially in the intro parts, while not technically seemless, it's a great direction visually. Loads of sexual tension, readers like that ya! Your fonts let you down big time. There are hundreds of free fonts on the web. Start at Blambot.com and work your way outward. Your art is worth more than these are giving you.
Good luck!
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